User talk:JFletcher/Perfect Mission
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A couple of pointers from me regarding this perfect mission. Most of it really is great.
- Instead of "quick walkthrough", I'd call it "mission brief" or "mission outline", which explains the mission. Theres no such thing as a quick walkthrough, it either walks you through it completely or not.
- If the main walkthrough is long (more than an average screenful) then it should go into a subpage too.
- Move the transcript to a subpage, since it is so long. I always use: User:Biggest_gta_fan_ever/Perfect_Mission/Transcript
- Leave external links till the end - after "see also" but before mission sequence
- In the external links, i'd do it like this: mission video (IGN.com) - because this actually links to the video (which is the important thing), and mentions which site it is at (brackets option). Your idea of using bold also works, but I would bold "video" or "guide" or whatever, instead of the mission name.
- We can actually embed trailers into articles, instead of having to link to them. Use the code:
<youtube>Z2KNGRVwZaU</youtube>
. If there is more than one video, make a subpage instead. Don't forget to also have a link to the youtube page as well, just in case the embedded video doesn't work.
Keep up the good work - Gboyers talk 17:36, 29 November 2008 (UTC)