Mel Random Encounter/Script - Revision history

A-Dust at 20:00, 17 April 2015

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	The following is a script of the first [[Random Characters in GTA IV Era\|encounter]] with [[Mel (GTA IV)\|Mel]] in [[Grand Theft Auto IV]].		The following is a '''script''' of the first [[Random Characters in GTA IV Era\|encounter]] with [[Mel (GTA IV)\|Mel]] in [[Grand Theft Auto IV]].

	==Script==		==Script==
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	'''Mel''': How many good years I got left, ten... fifteen? Not many. I don't wanna spend them staring into the bottom of a glass. No, sir. No way. I want to be someone, help people... seriously!		'''Mel''': How many good years I got left, ten... fifteen? Not many. I don't wanna spend them staring into the bottom of a glass. No, sir. No way. I want to be someone, help people... seriously!

	[[Category:GTA IV ~~Scripts~~]]		[[Category:Scripts for GTA IV]]

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	'''Loan shark''': I was done with Mel's drunk ass weeks ago.		'''Loan shark''': I was done with Mel's drunk ass weeks ago.

			'''Loan shark''': I been waiting to see this drunk ass loser for a long time.

			'''Loan shark''': He's gonna pay his debt.

			'''Loan shark''': I was done with Mel's drunk ass weeks ago.

			'''Loan shark''': Mel ain't nearly hit rock bottom yet.

	'''Mel''': Oh- oh, I'm getting the shakes again!		'''Mel''': Oh- oh, I'm getting the shakes again!

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	'''Mel''': You're a saint, a real positive person.		'''Mel''': You're a saint, a real positive person.

			or:

			'''Mel''': Thanks, man. Can you take me back to where we were before?

	''(Niko takes Mel back to Hove Beach)''		''(Niko takes Mel back to Hove Beach)''

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	'''Mel''': Shit, I can't remember none of that.		'''Mel''': Shit, I can't remember none of that.

			'''Mel''': Why didn't I fucking control myself?

	''(Niko kills the attackers)''		''(Niko kills the attackers)''

	'''Niko''': I don't think those guys are going to be calling that debt in.		'''Niko''': I don't think those guys are going to be calling that debt in.

			or:

			'''Niko''': You don't need to worry about those guys no more.

	'''Mel''': You're a saint, a real positive person.		'''Mel''': You're a saint, a real positive person.

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	''(They attack Niko and Mel)''		''(They attack Niko and Mel)''

			'''Loan shark''': Mel owes me one hell of a lot now.

			'''Loan shark''': I was done with Mel's drunk ass weeks ago.

	'''Mel''': Oh- oh, I'm getting the shakes again!		'''Mel''': Oh- oh, I'm getting the shakes again!
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	'''Mel''': Shit, I can't remember none of that.		'''Mel''': Shit, I can't remember none of that.

	~~'''Loan shark''': Mel owes me one hell of a lot now.~~

	''(Niko kills the attackers)''		''(Niko kills the attackers)''
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	'''Mel''': Positive, that's me. Here's the roll I was gonna give that loanshark. Maybe I'll keep a ten spot for myself though. Who knows what I'll need. So long. Be serene...		'''Mel''': Positive, that's me. Here's the roll I was gonna give that loanshark. Maybe I'll keep a ten spot for myself though. Who knows what I'll need. So long. Be serene...

			==Alternate dialogue==
			'''Niko''': What made you want to get clean?

			'''Mel''': Positive thinking is what it's all about. Shaking off all the negative energy and concentrating on the productive. Not hanging around with losers like Sergei. Drinking their lives away, it's not for me.

			'''Niko''': You seemed to like it when I last met you?

			'''Mel''': How many good years I got left, ten... fifteen? Not many. I don't wanna spend them staring into the bottom of a glass. No, sir. No way. I want to be someone, help people... seriously!

	[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]		[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]

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	==Dialogue==		==Dialogue==
	'''Mel''': He's in an alley off of Montauk Avenue. You'd be amazed by the things I've been doing since I cleaned up. I'm waking up before noon, for Christ's sake. Obviously, the DTs hit me pretty hard when I first got sober.		'''Mel''': He's in an alley off of Montauk Avenue.

			or:

			'''Mel''': They're just off Montauk in an alley.

			''(Niko drives to the meeting)''

			'''Mel''': You'd be amazed by the things I've been doing since I cleaned up. I'm waking up before noon, for Christ's sake. Obviously, the DTs hit me pretty hard when I first got sober.

	'''Niko''': I bet they did.		'''Niko''': I bet they did.
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	'''Mel''': Shit, I couldn't hold a glass of water without spilling it all over myself. And you shoulda seen the can after I was done with it, whoa, like the fucking sprinkler had gone off. Dry now though, dry as a bone.		'''Mel''': Shit, I couldn't hold a glass of water without spilling it all over myself. And you shoulda seen the can after I was done with it, whoa, like the fucking sprinkler had gone off. Dry now though, dry as a bone.

	''(Niko ~~takes~~ Mel to the meeting)''		''(Niko and Mel arrive at the meeting)''

	'''Mel''': This is where they should be. Can you clear things with him?		'''Mel''': This is where they should be. Can you clear things with him?

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	The following is a script of the first [[Random Characters in GTA IV Era\|encounter]] with [[Mel (GTA IV)\|Mel]] in [[Grand Theft Auto IV]].		The following is a script of the first [[Random Characters in GTA IV Era\|encounter]] with [[Mel (GTA IV)\|Mel]] in [[Grand Theft Auto IV]].

			==Script==
	'''Mel''': Comrades!		'''Mel''': Comrades!

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 '''Niko''': Don't worry. I'll make sure everything's cool.
-''(Niko and Mel meet meet with the others)''
+''(Niko and Mel meet meet with the loan shark)''
 '''Niko''': Hey man, we're here to pay back the money my friend here owed you. He doesn't want no trouble.
-'''Gangster''': You think money's gonna do it? Do ya, Mel? Can't you remember coming over to my place and throwing the TV out the window? Pissing all over my couch? Slumlord kicked me out on the street. You got a lot of debt to pay, Mel.
+'''Loan shark''': You think money's gonna do it? Do ya, Mel? Can't you remember coming over to my place and throwing the TV out the window? Pissing all over my couch? Slumlord kicked me out on the street. You got a lot of debt to pay, Mel.
 ''(They attack Niko and Mel)''
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 '''Mel''': I thought maybe that was another guy.
-'''Gangster''': Mel owes me one hell of a lot now.
+'''Mel''': Shit, I can't remember none of that.
 [[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]

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	'''Mel''': This is where they should be. Can you clear things with him?		'''Mel''': This is where they should be. Can you clear things with him?

			'''Niko''': Don't worry. I'll make sure everything's cool.

			''(Niko and Mel meet meet with the others)''

			'''Niko''': Hey man, we're here to pay back the money my friend here owed you. He doesn't want no trouble.

			'''Gangster''': You think money's gonna do it? Do ya, Mel? Can't you remember coming over to my place and throwing the TV out the window? Pissing all over my couch? Slumlord kicked me out on the street. You got a lot of debt to pay, Mel.

			''(They attack Niko and Mel)''

			'''Mel''': Oh- oh, I'm getting the shakes again!

			'''Mel''': Damn those blackouts.

			'''Mel''': I thought maybe that was another guy.

			'''Gangster''': Mel owes me one hell of a lot now.

	[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]		[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]

Gta-mysteries at 01:34, 12 October 2014

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	'''Niko''': Okay.		'''Niko''': Okay.

			==Dialogue==
			'''Mel''': He's in an alley off of Montauk Avenue. You'd be amazed by the things I've been doing since I cleaned up. I'm waking up before noon, for Christ's sake. Obviously, the DTs hit me pretty hard when I first got sober.

			'''Niko''': I bet they did.

			'''Mel''': Shit, I couldn't hold a glass of water without spilling it all over myself. And you shoulda seen the can after I was done with it, whoa, like the fucking sprinkler had gone off. Dry now though, dry as a bone.

			''(Niko takes Mel to the meeting)''

			'''Mel''': This is where they should be. Can you clear things with him?

	[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]		[[Category:GTA IV Scripts]]