Practice Swing/Script - Revision history

Gta-mysteries at 06:55, 19 September 2014

2014-09-19T06:55:27Z

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	''(Luis takes Tony back to his apartment)''		''(Luis takes Tony back to his apartment)''

	'''Luis''': Wow. What a champ. I love that guy/		'''Luis''': Wow. What a champ. I love that guy.

	'''Tony''': Sarcasm. Great. Just what I need right now. The world is crashing down around us, the wolves are baying for blood, and the guy who's meant to be my rock has become a bitter and cynical prick.		'''Tony''': Sarcasm. Great. Just what I need right now. The world is crashing down around us, the wolves are baying for blood, and the guy who's meant to be my rock has become a bitter and cynical prick.

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2014-09-02T06:30:42Z

Dialogue (Chinese Takeout complete)

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	'''Tony''': We might just make it. Go. Go.		'''Tony''': We might just make it. Go. Go.

			'''Tony''': What have I got us into?

	'''Tony''': They might be able to catch this thing on foot. Drive!		'''Tony''': They might be able to catch this thing on foot. Drive!
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	'''Tony''': That's it. Go. Go. Go. We might be in the clear.		'''Tony''': That's it. Go. Go. Go. We might be in the clear.

			'''Tony''': That's it. We're clear!

	'''Luis''': Yo, T. I just love your new friends. Fucking fantastic guys.		'''Luis''': Yo, T. I just love your new friends. Fucking fantastic guys.

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2014-09-02T05:55:06Z

Dialogue (Chinese Takeout complete)

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	'''Tony''': You think I like running around for that little shit? There was a time when the name Tony Prince meant something downtown. If you think I signed up to be this boy scout mafioso's stooge with a big grin on my face...		'''Tony''': You think I like running around for that little shit? There was a time when the name Tony Prince meant something downtown. If you think I signed up to be this boy scout mafioso's stooge with a big grin on my face...

	'''Luis''': Yeah, well, being his stooge's stooge ain't too much ~~glamor~~ neither.		'''Luis''': Yeah, well, being his stooge's stooge ain't too much glamour neither.

	'''Tony''': Money makes a man do strange things. Pussy makes him do stranger things, but luckily I'm not susceptible to those perils like you are.		'''Tony''': Money makes a man do strange things. Pussy makes him do stranger things, but luckily I'm not susceptible to those perils like you are.
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	'''Rocco''': Tell us who's causing problems already.		'''Rocco''': Tell us who's causing problems already.

			'''Rocco''': You gonna tell me who's holding out?

	'''Union Official''': There's a guy works at Libel, the foreman on the Columbus Avenue job. He's the guy holding this up.		'''Union Official''': There's a guy works at Libel, the foreman on the Columbus Avenue job. He's the guy holding this up.

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2014-09-02T04:12:02Z

Dialogue (Chinese Takeout complete)

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	'''Tony''': We're fucked.		'''Tony''': We're fucked.

	'''Tony''': Come on. Put some distance ~~between~~ us.		'''Tony''': Come on. Put some distance behind us.

	'''Tony''': Push it, Lou. Come on. We're nowhere near top speed in this thing.		'''Tony''': Push it, Lou. Come on. We're nowhere near top speed in this thing.

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2014-09-02T04:10:36Z

Alternate dialogue

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	'''Tony''': Good idea. Let's have you put us out of business. I may have dumped us in the crap but sadly, for you and ME, I'm the only one who knows how to keep us from drowning in it.		'''Tony''': Good idea. Let's have you put us out of business. I may have dumped us in the crap but sadly, for you and ME, I'm the only one who knows how to keep us from drowning in it.

			''(Tony and Luis follow Rocco out of the golf course)''

			'''Tony''': This is a new Tony Prince you got here, K. Not that gunshy pussy you shleped through Chinatown.

			or:

			'''Tony''': Okay, I'm helping with the shooting this time. You can't carry me through this like you did in Dim Sum Plaza.

			'''Tony''': Don't worry, L. I ain't gonna chicken out on you like I did in Chinatown.

	==Failing the mission==		==Failing the mission==

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2014-09-02T03:52:20Z

Dialogue (Chinese Takeout complete)

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	'''Tony''': We're fucked.		'''Tony''': We're fucked.

			'''Tony''': Come on. Put some distance between us.

	'''Tony''': Push it, Lou. Come on. We're nowhere near top speed in this thing.		'''Tony''': Push it, Lou. Come on. We're nowhere near top speed in this thing.

Gta-mysteries: /* Failing the mission */

2014-09-02T03:48:30Z

Failing the mission

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	'''Tony''': I can't handle anything on my own. It's amazing I don't ask you to come take a piss for me. Shit! Thanks a lot, partner.		'''Tony''': I can't handle anything on my own. It's amazing I don't ask you to come take a piss for me. Shit! Thanks a lot, partner.

			===Rocco abandoned===
			'''Luis''': So, we lost Rocco, but I'm thinking he'll come find us soon enough.

			'''Tony''': He's not going to be happy, either. I've got a feeling the prick's about to become even more insufferable.

			[[Category:TBOGT Scripts]]

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2014-09-02T03:47:02Z

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	'''Tony''': Damned if I know.		'''Tony''': Damned if I know.

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			'''Luis''': What's he doing moving the cart?

			'''Tony''': He might just like driving it. He still is JUST a brat after all.

	'''Luis''': Don't Rocco have someone else to hit the batting cage for him?		'''Luis''': Don't Rocco have someone else to hit the batting cage for him?
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	'''Tony''': Follow Rocco.		'''Tony''': Follow Rocco.

			'''Tony''': Keep after Rock!

	'''Tony''': Get away from them. Follow Rock.		'''Tony''': Get away from them. Follow Rock.

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2014-09-02T03:40:47Z

Failing the mission

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 '''Luis''': Right before she taught you how to suck a dick, Rocco? Get out a here.

Gta-mysteries: /* Dialogue (Chinese Takeout not completed) */

2014-09-02T02:41:41Z

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	'''Luis''': Oh yeah, I'll look back on these years of getting shots at and helping you clean up puke as the best times of my life.		'''Luis''': Oh yeah, I'll look back on these years of getting shots at and helping you clean up puke as the best times of my life.

			==Dialogue (Chinese Takeout complete)==
			'''Luis''': Fucking Rocco! After what happened in Chinatown, please tell me we gonna take a nine iron to his legs.

			'''Tony''': You think I like running around for that little shit? There was a time when the name Tony Prince meant something downtown. If you think I signed up to be this boy scout mafioso's stooge with a big grin on my face...

			'''Luis''': Yeah, well, being his stooge's stooge ain't too much glamor neither.

			'''Tony''': Money makes a man do strange things. Pussy makes him do stranger things, but luckily I'm not susceptible to those perils like you are.

			'''Luis''': Toto don't get you killed nearly as much, if recent times is anything to go by.

			'''Tony''': Don't underestimate it, Luis. The snatch has brought down empires bigger than our own.

			'''Luis''': You should get some T-shirts made, T. Get out of the nightclub business and concentrate on your philosophical sayings.

	''(The two arrive at the driving range)''		''(The two arrive at the driving range)''