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Re:Excuse Me?

In reply to Excuse Me?

The reference to Toni Cipriani being a caporegime in the Ray Machowski article was not necessary for the article, so that's why I removed it. As for the Leon McAffrey article that was a mistake for which I apologise and it has now been reverted back to your edit. I've been doing mass editing, which is rather tiresome and caused my rather lazy actions last night. I will say though that the headings (1998 and 2001) should remain, simply as a way to display the different games storylines. A-Dust 20:27, 22 September 2011 (BST)

Liberty State Penitentiary

Hey, you're right that Liberty State Penitentiary isn't enough for an article at the moment. I can't remember if the prison is an actual building, or if it's just mentioned as where Claude was. If it's a building, you could add the following:

Which game/s it features in
The precise location
Description of the building
Description of the interior (if relevant)
Description of its functionality (if any)
Any vehicles or NPCs that spawn there
What missions it's featured/mentioned in
Whether it's mentioned on any radio stations or billboards etc
Screenshots & videos

If it's not a building and it's just mentioned, then we can't have more than 2 sentences (what game it's in + what missions it's mentioned in), so there's no real point in having the article. If that's the case, we can redirect the article to the Give Me Liberty page, in case anyone searches for it. Make sense? gboyers ^talk 02:31, 18 October 2011 (BST)

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 The reference to Toni Cipriani being a caporegime in the Ray Machowski article was not necessary for the article, so that's why I removed it. As for the Leon McAffrey article that was a mistake for which I apologise and it has now been reverted back to your edit. I've been doing mass editing, which is rather tiresome and caused my rather lazy actions last night. I will say though that the headings (1998 and 2001) should remain, simply as a way to display the different games storylines. A-Dust 20:27, 22 September 2011 (BST)
+== Liberty State Penitentiary ==
+Hey, you're right that [[Liberty State Penitentiary]] isn't enough for an article at the moment. I can't remember if the prison is an actual building, or if it's just mentioned as where Claude was. If it's a building, you could add the following:
+*Which game/s it features in
+*The precise location
+*Description of the building
+*Description of the interior (if relevant)
+*Description of its functionality (if any)
+*Any vehicles or NPCs that spawn there
+*What missions it's featured/mentioned in
+*Whether it's mentioned on any radio stations or billboards etc
+*Screenshots & videos
+If it's not a building and it's just mentioned, then we can't have more than 2 sentences (what game it's in + what missions it's mentioned in), so there's no real point in having the article. If that's the case, we can redirect the article to the [[Give Me Liberty]] page, in case anyone searches for it. Make sense? [[User:Gboyers|gboyers]] <sup>[[User_talk:Gboyers|talk]]</sup> 02:31, 18 October 2011 (BST)