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:It's in need of cleanup, beacuse it's written like a walkthrough - mission articles are supposed to just describe; who gives the mission, what happens during the mission, and what the reward is. There's also the extensive use of 'you', which should, instead, be 'the player' or 'Niko'. I ''do'' agree that it's clear and easy to read, but I'm merely following GTA Wiki's [[Grand Theft Wiki:Cleanup|Policy]] | :It's in need of cleanup, beacuse it's written like a walkthrough - mission articles are supposed to just describe; who gives the mission, what happens during the mission, and what the reward is. There's also the extensive use of 'you', which should, instead, be 'the player' or 'Niko'. I ''do'' agree that it's clear and easy to read, but I'm merely following GTA Wiki's [[Grand Theft Wiki:Cleanup|Policy]] | ||
::Just a note that while I agree that cleanup is definitely needed for the word "you"; a walkthrough is fine as long as the instructions are neutral. For example, ''Drive to the safehouse, pick up Roman, Drive to the airport, catch a plane to [[Anywhere City]], etc'', however it is good (in my opinion) to | ::Just a note that while I agree that cleanup is definitely needed for the word "you"; a walkthrough is fine as long as the instructions are neutral. For example, ''Drive to the safehouse, pick up Roman, Drive to the airport, catch a plane to [[Anywhere City]], etc'', however it is good (in my opinion) to just have a "walkthrough" section and have the brief that says ''In this mission Niko and Roman catch a plane to Anywhere City''. '''[[User:Biggest gta fan ever|Biggest GTA Fan Ever]]<sup>''[[User talk:Biggest gta fan ever|Talk]]''</sup>''' 07:12, 23 March 2009 (UTC) | ||