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	Excellent - thats exactly the part of the brief that was annoying me. As for the walkthrough, I wouldn't centre the headings, keep them on the left where people look. In fact, I'd just use bold rather than <nowiki><big></nowiki> or a heading, since the headings are for fairly small amounts of text there. Also, either use sentence case or title case as per [[Grand_Theft_Wiki:Style_Guide#Page_Titles]] (you haven't hit either of those standards). Another useful part to the walkthrough would be explaining what you should bring before you start the mission, such as "make sure you have full health, armour is optional", and whether to bring many weapons, or load up on a specific type of ammunition (eg RPG, grenade, SMG). Either put it in the first sentence, a separate list, or perhaps we could even make a template for "mission requirements" or something? Just a thought - [[w:c:gta:User:Gboyers\|Gboyers]] <sup>[[:w:c:gta:User_talk:Gboyers\|talk]]</sup> 10:28, 1 December 2008 (UTC)		Excellent - thats exactly the part of the brief that was annoying me. As for the walkthrough, I wouldn't centre the headings, keep them on the left where people look. In fact, I'd just use bold rather than <nowiki><big></nowiki> or a heading, since the headings are for fairly small amounts of text there. Also, either use sentence case or title case as per [[Grand_Theft_Wiki:Style_Guide#Page_Titles]] (you haven't hit either of those standards). Another useful part to the walkthrough would be explaining what you should bring before you start the mission, such as "make sure you have full health, armour is optional", and whether to bring many weapons, or load up on a specific type of ammunition (eg RPG, grenade, SMG). Either put it in the first sentence, a separate list, or perhaps we could even make a template for "mission requirements" or something? Just a thought - [[w:c:gta:User:Gboyers\|Gboyers]] <sup>[[:w:c:gta:User_talk:Gboyers\|talk]]</sup> 10:28, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

			:Done! (with the headings). You're right, that is better. I think we're getting closer. Three things. Could the "Mission Requirements" become a new line in the [[Infobox mission\|infobox]]? Or is that for just official things (without a doubt will happen) and not for recommendations? (I actually realized that last bit while I was typing). As for images, the professionals use them, so they must be good to use, and in a perfect mission article we should aim to make it as good as possible. The problem is that the way that I could think to get screenshots that ''I'' actually want (an Internet image search can't give you the exact scene) would be to pause the video and screenshot the computer, then crop the rest of the window out, but I think that it would be horrible quality like that. The last thing is that, now that you mention the format of the walkthrough, did you like the format of the [[User:Biggest gta fan ever/Perfect Mission/Transcript\|script]]? See, I tried using just bold there, and it was easy to get confused with the character names (eg '''Niko:''' Hi!). '''[[user:Biggest gta fan ever\|Biggest GTA Fan Ever]]<sup>''[[user talk:Biggest gta fan ever\|Talk]]''</sup>''' 22:05, 1 December 2008 (UTC)