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Relevance?

I, personally, find that the first sentence of this article -

"The military is the armed forces of the United States of America, comprised of the US Army, the Marine Corps, the Navy, the Air Force and the Coast Guard."

- is completely irrelevant, and would just like to ask if it could be deleted and replaced with another opening statement? Ess-Tee 11:01, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Good call. I've adjusted the intro to be relevant to GTA games, rather than just explaining the military in general. Gboyers ^talk 12:59, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

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	- is completely irrelevant, and would just like to ask if it could be deleted and replaced with another opening statement? [[User:Ess-Tee\|Ess-Tee]] 11:01, 24 May 2009 (UTC)		- is completely irrelevant, and would just like to ask if it could be deleted and replaced with another opening statement? [[User:Ess-Tee\|Ess-Tee]] 11:01, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

			:Good call. I've adjusted the intro to be relevant to GTA games, rather than just explaining the military in general. [[User:Gboyers\|Gboyers]] <sup>[[User_talk:Gboyers\|talk]]</sup> 12:59, 24 May 2009 (UTC)