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This article needs to be rewritten in a more factual fashion. [[User:Bobagra|Bobagra]] 02:20, 6 May 2008 (UTC) | This article needs to be rewritten in a more factual fashion. [[User:Bobagra|Bobagra]] 02:20, 6 May 2008 (UTC) | ||
==Style of this page== | |||
I think this main article reads too much like a review; however, I'm not sure what to do about it. The first thing that comes to mind is to make some sort of sub-page, and transplant most of the 3rd, 4th, 5th, and 6th paragraphs, and all of "Critical Reception and Sales." [[Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas]] is very streamlined while still providing crucial information. I really prefer that way, but I'm bringing it up so I can get other perspectives. If nothing else, those things should at least be moved nearer to the bottom of the page. --[[:w:c:gta:User:GuildKnight|GuildKnight]]<sup>[[:w:c:gta:User_talk:GuildKnight|Talk2me]]</sup> 22:40, 7 May 2008 (UTC) | |||