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 ==Mission==
-Marty Chonks continues with his money problems, but now realizes that his [[Mrs. Chonks|wife]] was having an affair with someone he owes money to. His name is [[Carlos]], and he is losing patience with Marty, who is slow to pay back the money he owes. Marty tells Claude to pick him up from [[Chinatown, Portland|Chinatown]] and bring him back to the [[Bitch'n' Dog Food|Bitch'n' Dog Food Factory]], where he plans to kill him and turn him into dog food.
+Marty Chonks' money problems ensues, but now realizes that his [[Mrs. Chonks|wife]] was having an affair with someone he owes money to. His name is [[Carlos]], and he is losing patience with Marty, who is slow to pay back the money he owes. Marty tells Claude to pick him up from [[Chinatown, Portland|Chinatown]] and bring him back to the [[Bitch'n' Dog Food|Bitch'n' Dog Food Factory]], where he plans to kill him and turn him into dog food.
 Claude goes inside the factory premises to get in a [[Stallion]]. Claude then picks up Carlos and brings him back. Marty waits for them outside of the factory, and attempts to buy time. He invites Carlos into the factory, but Carlos declines and kills Marty.