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I know that we should try to use third person perspective wherever possible. I have tried to re-write mission pages removing ''you'' for ''the player'', only to realize that at the end, it's still in second person, saying ''Drive to ______ etc.''. I don't know if it's even possible to have a mission page in third person and I have made a mess where I have tried. Is there anything about that, to say that mission pages can be written as walkthroughs? I am ready to go back and re-write the pages again or revert my edits. '''[[user:Biggest gta fan ever|Biggest GTA Fan Ever]]<sup>''[[user talk:Biggest gta fan ever|Talk]]''</sup>''' 06:53, 1 November 2008 (UTC) | I know that we should try to use third person perspective wherever possible. I have tried to re-write mission pages removing ''you'' for ''the player'', only to realize that at the end, it's still in second person, saying ''Drive to ______ etc.''. I don't know if it's even possible to have a mission page in third person and I have made a mess where I have tried. Is there anything about that, to say that mission pages can be written as walkthroughs? I am ready to go back and re-write the pages again or revert my edits. '''[[user:Biggest gta fan ever|Biggest GTA Fan Ever]]<sup>''[[user talk:Biggest gta fan ever|Talk]]''</sup>''' 06:53, 1 November 2008 (UTC) | ||
:Wait, I just realized that the pages need to be completely re-written but '' | :Wait, I just realized that the pages need to be completely re-written but ''can'' become third person. Before I act though, I will see what you think about the situation. '''[[user:Biggest gta fan ever|Biggest GTA Fan Ever]]<sup>''[[user talk:Biggest gta fan ever|Talk]]''</sup>''' 06:58, 1 November 2008 (UTC) |