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== Clean Up == | == Clean Up == | ||
This article seems clean, can somebody tell me where it needs a clean up?--<font face="Papyrus" color="blue" size="3">[[User:Fairnick68|Fairnick68]]</font><font face="Papyrus" color="blue" size="2"><sup> [[User talk:Fairnick68|(talk)]]</sup></font> 16:23, 23 October 2011 (BST) | This article seems clean, can somebody tell me where it needs a clean up?--<font face="Papyrus" color="blue" size="3">[[User:Fairnick68|Fairnick68]]</font><font face="Papyrus" color="blue" size="2"><sup> [[User talk:Fairnick68|(talk)]]</sup></font> 16:23, 23 October 2011 (BST) | ||
Mission overviews (called Mission Summary on this page) should be written in a third person perspective, as in "The protagonist meets" and not "You meet" and I don't think think there should be any instructions on what you should do as the player either, as that should be kept in the mission walkthrough on a separate page (and not on the same page like here). There is also random speculation on the very first row which should only explain what the page is referring to. At least that is how I have understood it after reading through the help section here. --[[User:Andreaz1|Andreaz1]] 16:51, 23 October 2011 (BST) | |||