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 Firstly, this is not a stub. A stub is an article that ''could'' be useful, but in it's current state serves ''no'' useful purpose. For articles that ''are'' useful already, but could be even ''more'' useful (contain more information), use {{template|expand}}, but I honestly think that this article is very complete - What else can be said about it?
-As for that line "<tt>There is an undocumented and largely unknown mini game in [[GTA Vice City]],</tt> '''<tt>which goes like this</tt>''':" The part that I made bold sounds very unprofessional in my opinion, like part of a conversation, rather than encyclopaedic information. The sentence makes perfect sense without that line. Thoughts?
+As for that line "<tt>There is an undocumented and largely unknown mini game in [[GTA Vice City]],</tt> '''which goes like this''':" The part that I made bold sounds very unprofessional in my opinion, like part of a conversation, rather than encyclopaedic information. The sentence makes perfect sense without that line. Thoughts?
 About the line "<tt>(provided that there are pedestrians waiting to be picked up)</tt>", that's actually incorrect. From memory, any pedestrian that walks past close enough will enter the bus, am I correct? Even if I'm wrong, and not ''every'' pedestrian that walks past enters, still ''many'' do, which still renders that sentence incorrect - Thoughts?