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7 April 2012
17 November 2011
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I know we need to keep our writing simple, but having so many short, unconnected sentences here makes the page look like a 10-year old wrote it.
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ZS
I know we need to keep our writing simple, but having so many short, unconnected sentences here makes the page look like a 10-year old wrote it.
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