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'''Grand Theft Auto: The Untold Stories''' (2006 - 2011) was a fan-fiction series written by [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson|Zach Marsh]]. During its' short run, the series failed to become well-known amongst fan-fiction writers or Grand Theft Auto fans. The very small audience that had read the series had mixed to negative reactions - some loved the attempt to bridge the gap of the GTA games, while many saw Marsh's immature writing style and plot contradictions to be a turn-off.


Grand Theft Auto: The Untold Stories (2006) is a Text-Based Series written by [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson]]. In the series itself, it explains: WHY did Big Smoke and Ryder join the Ballas? Was Claude ALWAYS, or was he EVER, a "Mute"? WHY did 8-Ball start a Company? Well, the series can tell that to you. If it is turned into an ACTUAL series by Rockstar Games and Rockstar North, (which [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson]] hereby gives them permission to use), it would take the Split-Screen Format of 24. It already takes the Real-Time Format of 24 (and you'd be surprised about how long an hour can be from these Characters' Perspectives, each episode takes up about 17 pages of Microsoft Word). In Carl's profile, you can get a link to the site where he hosts the episodes.
The series itself had 4 episodes that started to bridge the gap between [[Grand Theft Auto: Vice City]] and [[Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas]] when the series itself had suddenly come to a halt. After five years of a hiatus, Marsh finally pulled the plug on the series in 2011, along with his two other mini-series [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson/Daily Dude Damage|Daily Dude Damage]] and [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson/Lost Cause|Grand Theft Auto: Lost Cause]].


GTA: The Untold Stories has inspired a VERY mini Mini-Series called [[Daily Dude Damage]], where 3 Male (and sometimes Female) Characters from the GTA Games battle it all out. The Episodes can be as long as a Harry Potter Book, or as short as a Sentence. Sometimes More or Less Characters will be involved.
The series made an attempt to bridge every [[Grand Theft Auto]] game together, with [[Tommy Vercetti]] and [[Carl Johnson]] taking the roles of the primary protagonists. It took place in "real time", and each episode took the place of one hour. An entire season took place over one day. Marsh's series, however, was also going to chronicle the days of Johnson's parents, and that story was going to be told in a format similar to a regular story, fragmented and with gaps in-between. The story of Vercetti’s parents wasn’t going to be covered due to the fact that it wasn't written to be as eventful as that of the Johnson family's first generation.


==Plot==
The series' earliest point chronologically was August 15th, 1928, with the birth of Brian Greaves, who would later become the father of [[Sweet|Sean]], [[Carl Johnson|Carl]], [[Kendl Johnson|Kendl]] and [[Brian Johnson|Brian]], and who is the initial protagonist - the entire series was going to revolve around his actions up until the time Carl is born. The series after that would largely go into detail about Carl's childhood along with that of Tommy Vercetti, a character who's family never makes any kind of appearance in the series until Tommy's birth. Despite the fact that Carl's family were the exclusive focal point of the series before this, Tommy would end up being the main protagonist due to his rivalry with [[Giorgio Forelli]] from his teenaged years onwards. Forelli would become the series' main antagonist. The [[Grand Theft Auto IV]] storyline would not have been directly involved with the series - it would've been mentioned in passing, and Niko Bellic would likely have been the only character to appear. The games L.A. Noire and Red Dead Redemption would not crossover with the storyline at any point in time.


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Marsh may continue the series at some point in the future due to his personal enjoyment of it, but that is unlikely. If this does happen, the four episodes that were initially released will likely be re-written entirely while staying true to the plot.


Note: Plot Information Only From Episodes That Have Aired Will Be Here:
==History==


08:00:00 AM EDT
===Premise and inital run===


The story so far started out in Vice City, 1986, 1 day after the events of GTA: Vice City ended, at 8:00 AM. Tommy Vercetti walks out into his deceased ex-friend Lance Vance's Infernus, and drives off. On a portable TV, a newsanchor advertises The Hyman Condo, owned by Mickey Willows. It is for sale. Tommy drives off and, when he gets there, he buys the place. As Tommy was driving, the story finally branches off, when Mickey Willows, a businessman who had just arrived via plane in Vice City, asked his co-worker, Carl Johnson, to, remotely, via satellite, scan the DNA of all the people with a GPS set to The Hyman Condo. Tommy Vercetti is one, the other is unknown.
The series was first conceptualized in 2005 when Marsh was actually playing Vice City. He decided to put his ideas to paper and would eventually type the first episode in 2006. The series follows a "real-time" format - of course, this can't be followed on paper, but if the series was a visual one rather than text-based, that means that the amount of time passed watching an episode is how much time passes in the lives of the characters as well.


Where Carl works is The Hyman Incorporated Commercial Institute, in Staunton Island, Liberty City.
Marsh released the first episode of The Untold Stories, a story that picks up a day after the story of Vice City and was aptly named "Storyline", in 2006 on fanfiction.net and his own website to largely positive reviews, albeit he only attracted an audience of a few people on either site. The few reviews that the series had recieved mostly praised the attempt to tie Vice City and San Andreas together, and there was universal approval of the choice of Tommy Vercetti and Carl Johnson as protagonists. Criticism laid on Marsh's immaturity as a writer - overuse of capitalization was prominent as were extended sentences. This was largely due to his age, having only been 11 at the time of the series' premiere.


Mickey is shocked that Tommy Vercetti got out of prison. Internationally he was known for killing 11 people. Mickey, to be sure, wants Carl to check the prison files. Mickey calls a friend, and co-worker, Jimmy Lincoln. Jimmy, too, is shocked that he's out. Carl confirms this, saying that he left on a plane to Vice City a day after getting out of prison.
===Hiatus and demise of the series===


When Tommy buys the Condo, he finds an earpiece on the roof. A noise makes him jump as he flies the helicopter, almost crashing. Tommy is told to go to the Hyman Memorial Stadium. When he gets there, Tommy has 10 minutes to get all of the checkpoints.
However, when the next three episodes were released, the small audience Marsh had initially attracted washed their hands of the series. Episode 2 was met with mixed reviews due to its' rushed explanation of the death of [[Brian Johnson]], and one fear was that the series would get too far ahead of itself, wrapping up a story after only a few episodes/hours and leaving the rest of the season/day as a bunch of filler.


Carl was going into Portland, when he gets a call from his brother, Sean, A.K.A. Sweet. He's needed in San Andreas, as the Ballas have an advantage with more turf and gang members. One even broke into The Johnson House.
Episode 3 recieved scathing reviews and was the worst-recieved of the entire four episodes. It was considered all over the place with its' plot and droned on and on with far-fetched action, including scenes where characters used technology inconsistent with 1986.


Sweet tells his family the good news.
Episode 4 was also negatively recieved, and the post on Marsh's website was actually attacked by a fan who said the episode contradicted "everything in [Vice City and San Andreas] it was trying to bridge together." After the extremely negative - and even sometimes cruel - reviews that the last 3 episodes recieved, the series went on a hiatus until 2011, when Marsh finally confirmed the death of the series along with his two other mini-series [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson/Daily Dude Damage|Daily Dude Damage]] and [[User:Carl "CJ" Johnson/Lost Cause|Lost Cause]].


Tommy has 30 seconds left and 3 checkpoints left. Tommy gets 2, and tries to get the last one, but can't. Tommy asks for 30 more seconds. He's allowed that, but nothing more. Tommy gets the checkpoint just as the time runs out.
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Carl is, pretty much, already at the airport.
 
Carl calls the Co-CEO at his workplace (Carl is the CEO himself), and says he'll need to take over his position.
 
Carl asks Joey Leone to fill in for the Co-CEO, Rick, but he can't, so Rick has to be the CEO and Co-CEO.
 
Tommy is given another Helicopter and some cake by Mickey and Jimmy. He has two men armed with M-16s and a Pilot. Tommy buys The Skumhole Shack for $1000, then takes off for the Airport (wanting to annihalate all the remaining Forelli members).
 
But on the way, the chopper's ambushed by some Haitians (presumably, and most likely, hired by Giorgio Forelli) on a bridge (the bridge to Leaf Links). One M-16-totting man is killed. The other calls for backup from Fort Baxter, and jumps off, managing to kill some Haitians, but then is killed anyway. A rocket blows up the top half of a Billboard the helicopter was taking cover behind, and so they go to the bottom half.
 
Tommy is glad when some Hunters blow up the part of the bridge the Haitians were on, killing all of them.
 
But then he motices the Helicopter was on the roof for a while. The pilot has been killed. Tommy was hit, and a soldier takes him into a Hunter, flying off.
 
09:00:00 AM EDT
 
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==Official Info (From Zachary Marsh)==
 
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MAJOR SPOILERS!
 
Note: Info also pertains to future episodes, and episodes that take place in the past, but have not been made.
 
* Real-Life Cities, Objects, People, And Other Things, will be used, along with the made-up things (I.E. a Harrier can be used, but so can a Hydra), albeit, probably not in the near future.
* The first season of the GTA: VC - GTA: SA Series has started at 8:00 AM, EDT, on December 31, 1986, and will end at 8:00 AM, EDT, on January 1, 1987 (due to Brian's death happening in 1986, to keep it at 5 years before San Andreas, Zach has made it be in Late 1986). This indicates that the GTA: VC - GTA: SA Series will only have 5 (likely), 4 (slightly less likely), or 6 (nearly impossible) Seasons. Any number larger is impossible, smaller is closer to impssible than 6 is.
* Brian's death will be a cause of several deaths throughout the series, especially in this Season, and most of the deaths will be Giorgio Forelli's men, as acts of revenge by CJ, Sweet, and Tommy.
* Giorgio Forelli is the main antagonist of the series, and will remain so until his eventual death at the hands of Tommy and/or Carl (this is imminent, and, as movies and TV Shows have been around for a long time, this shouldn't be that big of a spoiler), whereas someone "you won't believe" takes his place.
* Tommy and Carl have known eachother since they were 3.
* Tommy and Carl are close friends.
* Tommy and Carl are the main Protagonists of the series.
* Tommy and Carl were both born on September 11, 1955.
* There are many plot branches and twists.
* The series will probably take at least 30 years to complete, as a sheer 3 episodes are complete, and it's almost been a year.
* There are continuity errors, like things appearing on TV and such, that weren't around until after the time that episode/season takes place. These are intentional, however, as the actual GTA series itself has several in every game, or at least most of the games.
* Kendl will do something "unimaginable" at some point. Possibilities include killing someone, or turning on the protagonists.
 
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Latest revision as of 10:27, 31 March 2013

Grand Theft Auto: The Untold Stories (2006 - 2011) was a fan-fiction series written by Zach Marsh. During its' short run, the series failed to become well-known amongst fan-fiction writers or Grand Theft Auto fans. The very small audience that had read the series had mixed to negative reactions - some loved the attempt to bridge the gap of the GTA games, while many saw Marsh's immature writing style and plot contradictions to be a turn-off.

The series itself had 4 episodes that started to bridge the gap between Grand Theft Auto: Vice City and Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas when the series itself had suddenly come to a halt. After five years of a hiatus, Marsh finally pulled the plug on the series in 2011, along with his two other mini-series Daily Dude Damage and Grand Theft Auto: Lost Cause.

The series made an attempt to bridge every Grand Theft Auto game together, with Tommy Vercetti and Carl Johnson taking the roles of the primary protagonists. It took place in "real time", and each episode took the place of one hour. An entire season took place over one day. Marsh's series, however, was also going to chronicle the days of Johnson's parents, and that story was going to be told in a format similar to a regular story, fragmented and with gaps in-between. The story of Vercetti’s parents wasn’t going to be covered due to the fact that it wasn't written to be as eventful as that of the Johnson family's first generation.

The series' earliest point chronologically was August 15th, 1928, with the birth of Brian Greaves, who would later become the father of Sean, Carl, Kendl and Brian, and who is the initial protagonist - the entire series was going to revolve around his actions up until the time Carl is born. The series after that would largely go into detail about Carl's childhood along with that of Tommy Vercetti, a character who's family never makes any kind of appearance in the series until Tommy's birth. Despite the fact that Carl's family were the exclusive focal point of the series before this, Tommy would end up being the main protagonist due to his rivalry with Giorgio Forelli from his teenaged years onwards. Forelli would become the series' main antagonist. The Grand Theft Auto IV storyline would not have been directly involved with the series - it would've been mentioned in passing, and Niko Bellic would likely have been the only character to appear. The games L.A. Noire and Red Dead Redemption would not crossover with the storyline at any point in time.

Marsh may continue the series at some point in the future due to his personal enjoyment of it, but that is unlikely. If this does happen, the four episodes that were initially released will likely be re-written entirely while staying true to the plot.

History

Premise and inital run

The series was first conceptualized in 2005 when Marsh was actually playing Vice City. He decided to put his ideas to paper and would eventually type the first episode in 2006. The series follows a "real-time" format - of course, this can't be followed on paper, but if the series was a visual one rather than text-based, that means that the amount of time passed watching an episode is how much time passes in the lives of the characters as well.

Marsh released the first episode of The Untold Stories, a story that picks up a day after the story of Vice City and was aptly named "Storyline", in 2006 on fanfiction.net and his own website to largely positive reviews, albeit he only attracted an audience of a few people on either site. The few reviews that the series had recieved mostly praised the attempt to tie Vice City and San Andreas together, and there was universal approval of the choice of Tommy Vercetti and Carl Johnson as protagonists. Criticism laid on Marsh's immaturity as a writer - overuse of capitalization was prominent as were extended sentences. This was largely due to his age, having only been 11 at the time of the series' premiere.

Hiatus and demise of the series

However, when the next three episodes were released, the small audience Marsh had initially attracted washed their hands of the series. Episode 2 was met with mixed reviews due to its' rushed explanation of the death of Brian Johnson, and one fear was that the series would get too far ahead of itself, wrapping up a story after only a few episodes/hours and leaving the rest of the season/day as a bunch of filler.

Episode 3 recieved scathing reviews and was the worst-recieved of the entire four episodes. It was considered all over the place with its' plot and droned on and on with far-fetched action, including scenes where characters used technology inconsistent with 1986.

Episode 4 was also negatively recieved, and the post on Marsh's website was actually attacked by a fan who said the episode contradicted "everything in [Vice City and San Andreas] it was trying to bridge together." After the extremely negative - and even sometimes cruel - reviews that the last 3 episodes recieved, the series went on a hiatus until 2011, when Marsh finally confirmed the death of the series along with his two other mini-series Daily Dude Damage and Lost Cause.